In Writing, we learned how to give multiple reasons and use the word because to share our opinions with others. We learned how to use transitions words (first, second, third, etc.) and how to use adjectives to make our reasons even more persuasive. Students worked to give examples to make their writing even stronger and learned how to talk back to make their opinion even stronger.
Example of a opinion piece with craft moves and elaboration:
Do you have a favorite animal? My favorite animal is a giraffe. A giraffe is a tall mammal with a long neck and large brown spots. Giraffes can be found on the savanna in Africa.
The first reason I like giraffes is because they are cute. For example they have long black eyelashes and hairy hornes. Some people think giraffes look funny, but I think they are cute!
The second reason I like them is because they have a long purplish tongue that can wrap around green leaves high up in the trees.
The last reason I like giraffes is because they are gentle. I fed a giraffe peanuts in Africa and the way it used its lips to gently eat the peanuts out of my hand reminded me of a horse.
Giraffes are my favorite animal because they are cute, have cool tongues, and are gentle. Next time you see a giraffe, check out their cool parts. You will see how cute they are. I love giraffes!
*In the example above you will see an opening where a question was asked to hook the reader and a brief description of a giraffe was given. Three reasons were shared and a closing where the opinion was restated was given. The craft moves included an example, talking back, a short personal story, and a comparison. Adjectives were used to strengthen the opinion piece. You can work on opinion writing at home too!
- How can we turn new larger words into snap words?
- How can we go back and reread to scoop up words, with our eyes, to make our reading sound smooth?
- How to break words into smaller part (syllables).
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